Troubadour's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[abscess]

Pretty darn good

High points for ambition and quality, with a few points off due to technical stuff, like no play button on the title page, and mostly unreadable text.

Excellent work!

50vmp responds:

there is actually a very faint play button that takes the place of the also very faint loading bar but thank you

yeah i hate the text for um the scene where the guy is talking, i know his voice is hardly understandable so i really should have revised the text.

I actually might edit this and do that.

[Vague mind]

What's there is good, just not much there.

Needs sound badly! It's neat, but needs more.

paragsid responds:

Thanx a lot... i know it's raw and all. i did this to test my new tablet. my friends saw it and said i should upload it. I hadn't tweaked it or anything. I am really blown by the response cos, this i too admit is very very raw. But now i'm inspired. Thanx guys. I need all the suggestions and hints.

[The Order Of The Earth]

The Narrative was alright, but. . .

You need to spend some more time with your graphics. There is alot you can do that does not involve complex animation that can add a bit of motion to your scenes. Also, adding some different camera angles to break the monotony would be a good thing.

Xela89 responds:

Thanks, this is the sort of reviews I find helpful. I'll definately work on alternate camera angles and more intense graphics.

Look out for part 2 :)

[Service Announcement]

Yikes!

to preachy and no pr0n u suck u shuld be blamed i give 0 cuz you suck

I didn't have any problem following the speed, but subtitles might work in your favor. IT almost makes me afraid of what to expect when I start putting in submissions. . .

stoners-lunchbox responds:

You should expect the worst of criticism, but nobody deserves a plain "blam this piece of crap! you suck!". Otherwise authors can't improve, and that stuffs it up for all of us. For the authors, for the voting newgrounders, for the tourists, for the head honcho behind this site... It all starts from something that simple...

[Black Ninja opening test]

Pretty sweet!

Can't wait to see more!

KenSkaii responds:

dun worry you will see more soon XD.