Broken
Buttons do not work at title screen.
Broken
Buttons do not work at title screen.
Seems to be bugged.
The play button on the title page loops back to the title page.
What's there is good, just not much there.
Needs sound badly! It's neat, but needs more.
Thanx a lot... i know it's raw and all. i did this to test my new tablet. my friends saw it and said i should upload it. I hadn't tweaked it or anything. I am really blown by the response cos, this i too admit is very very raw. But now i'm inspired. Thanx guys. I need all the suggestions and hints.
Sweeeeet.
Nice going. Better animation than most of the stuff that comes through the portal, I'll tell you that much. I look forward to seeing more of your stuff!
Looking good. . .
. . .but you might want to try to tell more of the story at one time. Keep it up, and don't rush yourself!
The Narrative was alright, but. . .
You need to spend some more time with your graphics. There is alot you can do that does not involve complex animation that can add a bit of motion to your scenes. Also, adding some different camera angles to break the monotony would be a good thing.
Thanks, this is the sort of reviews I find helpful. I'll definately work on alternate camera angles and more intense graphics.
Look out for part 2 :)
Yikes!
to preachy and no pr0n u suck u shuld be blamed i give 0 cuz you suck
I didn't have any problem following the speed, but subtitles might work in your favor. IT almost makes me afraid of what to expect when I start putting in submissions. . .
You should expect the worst of criticism, but nobody deserves a plain "blam this piece of crap! you suck!". Otherwise authors can't improve, and that stuffs it up for all of us. For the authors, for the voting newgrounders, for the tourists, for the head honcho behind this site... It all starts from something that simple...
Great animation, Great humor.
One request; subtitles. The visual aspects were great, but I have the feeling I would have found it even funnier if I could understand the words to the song.
Blarg?
Age 47, Male
Self-Employed
BA Art Degree
Iowa
Joined on 10/14/05